The slow light of morning
slips into awakening
with secrets of the dawn,

of silence stored in mountain caves
lined with walls of ice,

flowing now like a river
in the rise of springtime song.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reading of “Secrets of the Dawn” with music by Paul Cardall

 

 

3 Responses

  1. Thank you for this beautiful poem Don. Springtime is teasing us here in the Colorado Rockies and your poem captures the essence I have been feeling. “Flowing now like a river in the rise of Springtime song” – perfect.

  2. Here, in your sublime words, Don, I hear a multifaceted set of metaphors: Amid the seemingly slow Light of Morning’s Dawn awakens one’s Inspiration. Yet such may well remain a silent secret, right up until the icy, cavelike walls of fear melt then flow into a rising river of Self-Acceptance and Assurance. Then Inspiration can spring forth for Real, moving mountains of creative potential! Let’s, You and I, Assure a New Dawning of Inspiration Now!

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