Space for the Unseen

the roar,
frantic movement
of the hive;
breath slows,
making space
for the unseen.




Waldron Sunrise

Waldron Sunrise


4 Responses to “Space for the Unseen”

  1. Stan Grindstaff says:

    Interesting structure, Don, like breath on the outside & inside…
    One word, two words twice, three words… & again revealing more…

  2. Jim Ehmke says:

    Be still an instant and go Home.

  3. An invitation to making space within the hive…
    I am reminded there is a spirit of making space that answers.

  4. Pichay says:

    Thank you, Don. Hive rhymes with Alive…when the frantic and the unseen space are acknowledged as part of the whole..

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