Outside
the roar,
frantic movement
of the hive;
within
breath slows,
making space
for the unseen.

Waldron Sunrise
Outside
the roar,
frantic movement
of the hive;
within
breath slows,
making space
for the unseen.
Waldron Sunrise
Interesting structure, Don, like breath on the outside & inside…
One word, two words twice, three words… & again revealing more…
Be still an instant and go Home.
An invitation to making space within the hive…
I am reminded there is a spirit of making space that answers.
Thank you, Don. Hive rhymes with Alive…when the frantic and the unseen space are acknowledged as part of the whole..