Outside the roar,
frantic movement
of the hive;

within breath slows,
making space
for the unseen.

 

Waldron Sunrise
Waldron Sunrise

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4 Responses

  1. Interesting structure, Don, like breath on the outside & inside…
    One word, two words twice, three words… & again revealing more…

  2. Thank you, Don. Hive rhymes with Alive…when the frantic and the unseen space are acknowledged as part of the whole..

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