Singular and aware
I go within
to the place of silence,
dropping like a seal
into cold dark water.
Singular and aware
I go within
to the place of silence,
dropping like a seal
into cold dark water.
Nice rewrite Don.
I love the way this version draws me in immediately .. while experiencing the imagery of oneness of spirit between you, the eagle, and the seal. Thank you for sharing your collaboration with Sandy .. and now with us.
It is fun to dig deeper into your process and to see the results of a well thought out comment.