From a cleft in sharp rock
water emerges from the mountain
to shine on lichen and a small stream
where swifts and marmots drink.
Gathering strength and falling,
brown rocks glisten, birds gather,
fish appear in circling eddies.
One stream reaches into another,
merging in deep ravines,
to fall out over stone ledges
alive with sunlight and oxygen.
River bears the weight,
rolling stones along the bottom,
feeding fish on their path home,
with herons tall and brooding along the banks.
Hawks circle above the broad stripe of water,
the grasslands alive with rich loam,
out onto the broad reach
where the bar breaks the sea
in one undaunted wave,
with stories of mountain,
crow and coyote, and the ocean
ravenous for all the river will tell.
Joined and joining. I love that dynamic, and celebrate the confluences I know, sharing the stories of our journeys. Thanks, Don.
A avid description of life doing its thing!!!(smile)
You sound like a fly fisherman! It was never really about “the fish,” eh? Bravo!
Don, The rhythm of the poem, its pace and falling quality into itself and beyond give the words their reality. This is a poem to be sung. I hope you can sing it in some public gathering.
Well done, Don. I like the “fly fisherman” remark of Teryl Johansson, too.
Yes, the cadence of the words carries the spirit of the flow through varied terrain.
A lovely, strong melody.
Don: Spectacular word imagery of water and stream and river to sea. I felt like i was on a magical journey with you. Beautiful poem for a beautiful day.
Thank you, Don. I send my regard from the headwaters near my back yard.
I could hear the song of the mountain stream as it winds its way downstream over and around pebbles and boulders between the lines of your poem. Mountain streams make such mesmerising sounds. I agree, your poetic verses are lyrics for a song. Thank you, Don.
True magic. Healing. The river is capable of floating heavy stones bearing the weight of all things. Love this poem. We witness alpha and omega and all things between.
We are truly all one Brother. Thanks for sharing this cascading gift.
Gorgeous photo to accompany this flowing mountain stream, ever-swelling as it moves to its joyous destination!
This is a stunning depiction of nature’s beautiful flow. Thank you, Don for this gift!