Morning Breeze

You don’t have to correct the world
nor the billions of people.
The stars were placed long ago,
the weary moon constant in its track.
You just may have to let go
and give yourself
to the soft morning breeze
with its gentle hint of rain.

 

 

 


 


9 Responses to “Morning Breeze”

  1. Susan Beckstrom says:

    Donm
    This really resonates with me. In these times, how refreshing to be reminded so eloquently to just breathe. Thanks for you!

  2. Rose Meeker says:

    This is eloquent, and very timely for me, as I’m sorting some deep questions. Thank you!

  3. Pichay says:

    I let go…

  4. Don…reminiscent of a Mary Oliver poem….”you don’t have to to crawl on your knees for a hundred feet repenting…”…”…wonderful.

  5. patrick Pinson says:

    Nature is spirits tranquilizer! Simple and sweet Don – accept that which I cannot change!

  6. Veronica Lim says:

    Thank you, Don! I FEEL the breeze, soft with moisture.

  7. David Barnes says:

    thank you Don – a peaceful restful presence. I roll over, lie still, think of your poem, listen to the morning rain, breathe deep the wet earth smells – no work today

  8. Alice Penwell says:

    Wonderfull poetry. I sent one of my poems to Michael Cecil and in his reply he sent “Morning Breeze”. So I have connected with your site now and your blessing words. Thank you!

  9. Jae Hyoung Lee says:

    Thank you for your beautiful poem. I trust you allow me
    to introduce this poem in my FB translating into Korean.

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